wandering barefoot in the port-a-potty
although "wandering barefoot along the shore"
is the ultimate big-budget feel-good summer hit,
(you can't go wrong with walking in the sand,
relaxing under the palms, wading along the shore,
splashing in the waves, and sailing in the bay.)
"shades of vanilla"
has the makings of a modern masterpiece.
its fresh, yet timeless, sense of nuance
comforts without lulling.
unfortunately, after the early, slightly crunchy
brilliance of "vanilla nut cake"
the denouement just feels cheap.
[spoiler warning: plot and/or ending details follow.]
posted by self_invasion | 11:00 PM
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